I asked a question last month. https://forum-controlsystems.abb.com/...
I tried to follow your instructions. First I tried to connect with serial port. But it gave me message "Communication error (#0): logout performed". Then I tried with LAN. Everything was fine except sdclone. It showed message like "writing user program, configuration data and userdata to SD card USERDATA\PM83\USERPG\... You might be logged off by CodeSys in between (e.g. logged in via CM577). failed." I connected LAN directly to PM583 and also to CM577. But both case gave me same error.
as I wrote you in the procedure, you must follow the instructions step by step.
And above all before launching the command SDCLONE, have the cpu in stop.
The procedure has been tested several times and if you follow the steps correctly it must work.
Let us know about the results